Merge branch 'cbalane-master-patch-39280' into 'master'

Update Dedicated DR section in Docs

See merge request https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/gitlab/-/merge_requests/154839



Merged-by: Lysanne Pinto <lpinto@gitlab.com>
Approved-by: Lysanne Pinto <lpinto@gitlab.com>
Co-authored-by: Chris Balane <cbalane@gitlab.com>

doc/subscriptions/gitlab_dedicated/index.md

@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ Adopting a caching proxy in the customer network will further reduce this risk.
 
 #### Disaster Recovery
 
-When [onboarding](../../administration/dedicated/create_instance.md#step-2-create-your-gitlab-dedicated-instance) to GitLab Dedicated, you can provide a Secondary AWS region in which your data is stored. This region is used to recover your GitLab Dedicated instance in case of a disaster. Regular backups of all GitLab Dedicated datastores (including Database and Git repositories) are taken and tested regularly and stored in your desired secondary region. GitLab Dedicated also provides the ability to store copies of these backups in a separate cloud region of choice for greater redundancy.
+When [onboarding](../../administration/dedicated/create_instance.md#step-2-create-your-gitlab-dedicated-instance) to GitLab Dedicated, you specify a Secondary AWS region in which your data will be stored. This region is used to recover your GitLab Dedicated instance in case of a disaster. Regular backups of all GitLab Dedicated datastores (including Database and Git repositories) are taken and tested regularly and stored in your desired secondary region. GitLab Dedicated also provides the ability to store copies of these backups in a separate cloud region of choice for greater redundancy.
 
 For more information, read about the [recovery plan for GitLab Dedicated](https://handbook.gitlab.com/handbook/engineering/infrastructure/team/gitlab-dedicated/slas/#disaster-recovery-plan) as well as RPO and RTO targets. These targets are available only when both the primary and secondary regions are supported by GitLab Dedicated. See below for a [list of available AWS regions](#available-aws-regions) for GitLab Dedicated.