From f43ed9aed68bfaf2811c1cec13a4bdd81effb00e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Craig Norris <cnorris@gitlab.com>
Date: Mon, 7 Jun 2021 23:30:38 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Style updates to Password storage page

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 doc/security/password_storage.md | 19 ++++++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/security/password_storage.md b/doc/security/password_storage.md
index 260b60a4ad328..7d8ac3bad3946 100644
--- a/doc/security/password_storage.md
+++ b/doc/security/password_storage.md
@@ -7,10 +7,19 @@ type: reference
 
 # Password storage **(FREE)**
 
-GitLab stores user passwords in a hashed format, to prevent passwords from being visible.
+GitLab stores user passwords in a hashed format to prevent passwords from being
+stored as plain text.
 
-GitLab uses the [Devise](https://github.com/heartcombo/devise) authentication library, which handles the hashing of user passwords. Password hashes are created with the following attributes:
+GitLab uses the [Devise](https://github.com/heartcombo/devise) authentication
+library to hash user passwords. Created password hashes have these attributes:
 
-- **Hashing**: the [`bcrypt`](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bcrypt) hashing function is used to generate the hash of the provided password. This is a strong, industry-standard cryptographic hashing function.
-- **Stretching**: Password hashes are [stretched](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Key_stretching) to harden against brute-force attacks. GitLab uses a stretching factor of 10 by default.
-- **Salting**: A [cryptographic salt](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Salt_(cryptography)) is added to each password to harden against pre-computed hash and dictionary attacks. Each salt is randomly generated for each password, so that no two passwords share a salt, to further increase security.
+- **Hashing**: The [`bcrypt`](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bcrypt) hashing
+  function is used to generate the hash of the provided password. This is a
+  strong, industry-standard cryptographic hashing function.
+- **Stretching**: Password hashes are [stretched](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Key_stretching)
+  to harden against brute-force attacks. By default, GitLab uses a stretching
+  factor of 10.
+- **Salting**: A [cryptographic salt](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Salt_(cryptography))
+  is added to each password to harden against pre-computed hash and dictionary
+  attacks. To increase security, each salt is randomly generated for each
+  password, with no two passwords sharing a salt.
-- 
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