diff --git a/doc/user/analytics/dora_metrics.md b/doc/user/analytics/dora_metrics.md
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--- a/doc/user/analytics/dora_metrics.md
+++ b/doc/user/analytics/dora_metrics.md
@@ -24,15 +24,6 @@ For software leaders, tracking velocity alongside quality metrics ensures they'r
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 For a video explanation, see [DORA metrics: User analytics](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jYQSH4EY6_U) and [GitLab speed run: DORA metrics](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1BrcMV6rCDw).
 
-## DORA metrics in GitLab
-
-GitLab provides different analytics and insights about DORA metrics, which are available in the following Analytics features:
-
-- DORA metrics in the [Value Streams Dashboard](value_streams_dashboard.md), which are available out-of-the-box and help you identify trends, patterns, and opportunities for improvement. These metrics are displayed in the [DORA metrics comparison panel](value_streams_dashboard.md#devsecops-metrics-comparison-panels) and the [DORA Performers score panel](value_streams_dashboard.md#dora-performers-score-panel).
-- DORA metrics in [CI/CD analytics charts](ci_cd_analytics.md), which show pipeline success rates and duration, and the history of DORA metrics over time.
-- DORA metrics in [Insights reports](../project/insights/index.md), where you can also use [DORA query parameters](../../user/project/insights/index.md#dora-query-parameters) to create custom charts.
-- [(DORA) key metrics API](../../api/dora/metrics.md), which includes all metrics.
-
 ## Deployment frequency
 
 > - [Introduced](https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/gitlab/-/issues/394712) fix for the frequency calculation formula for `all` and `monthly` intervals in GitLab 16.0.
@@ -198,53 +189,28 @@ record.branches_for_lead_time_for_changes = ['development', 'staging', 'master',
 record.save!
 ```
 
-## Retrieve DORA metrics data
-
-To retrieve DORA data, use the [GraphQL](../../api/graphql/reference/_index.md) or the [REST](../../api/dora/metrics.md) APIs.
-
-The following example uses the GraphQL API to retrieve the monthly deployment frequency for a given time period:
-
-```graphql
-{
-  project(fullPath: "gitlab-org/gitlab") {
-    dora {
-      metrics(
-        startDate: "2023-12-01"
-        endDate: "2024-01-31"
-        interval: MONTHLY
-      ) {
-        date
-        deploymentFrequency
-        leadTimeForChanges
-        timeToRestoreService
-        changeFailureRate
-      }
-    }
-  }
-}
-```
-
-You can explore the GraphQL API resources with the interactive [GraphQL explorer](../../api/graphql/index.md#interactive-graphql-explorer).
-
 ## Measure DORA metrics
 
-### Measure DORA metrics without using GitLab CI/CD pipelines
+### Without using GitLab CI/CD pipelines
 
 Deployment frequency is calculated based on the deployments record, which is created for typical push-based deployments.
 These deployment records are not created for pull-based deployments, for example when Container Images are connected to GitLab with an agent.
 
 To track DORA metrics in these cases, you can [create a deployment record](../../api/deployments.md#create-a-deployment) using the Deployments API.
 You must set the environment name where the deployment tier is configured, because the tier variable is specified for the given environment, not for the deployments.
-For more information, see [track deployments of an external deployment tool](../../ci/environments/external_deployment_tools.md).
+For more information, see how to [track deployments of an external deployment tool](../../ci/environments/external_deployment_tools.md).
 
-### Measure DORA metrics with Jira
+### With Jira
 
 - Deployment frequency and lead time for changes are calculated based on GitLab CI/CD and Merge Requests (MRs), and do not require Jira data.
-- Time to restore service and change failure rate require [GitLab incidents](../../operations/incident_management/manage_incidents.md) for the calculation. For more information, see [Measure DORA Time to restore service and Change failure rate with external incidents](#measure-dora-time-to-restore-service-and-change-failure-rate-with-external-incidents) and the [Jira incident replicator guide](https://gitlab.com/smathur/jira-incident-replicator).
+- Time to restore service and change failure rate require [GitLab incidents](../../operations/incident_management/manage_incidents.md) for the calculation. For more information, see how to measure these metrics [with external incidents](#with-external-incidents) and the [Jira incident replicator guide](https://gitlab.com/smathur/jira-incident-replicator).
+
+### With external incidents
 
-### Measure DORA Time to restore service and Change failure rate with external incidents
+You can measure the time to restore service and change failure rate for incident management.
 
-For PagerDuty, you can set up a [webhook to automatically create a GitLab incident for each PagerDuty incident](../../operations/incident_management/manage_incidents.md#using-the-pagerduty-webhook).
+For PagerDuty, you can [set up a webhook](../../operations/incident_management/manage_incidents.md#using-the-pagerduty-webhook)
+to automatically create a GitLab incident for each PagerDuty incident.
 This configuration requires you to make changes in both PagerDuty and GitLab.
 
 For other incident management tools, you can set up the
@@ -254,9 +220,18 @@ and use it to automatically:
 1. [Create an incident when an alert is triggered](../../operations/incident_management/manage_incidents.md#automatically-when-an-alert-is-triggered).
 1. [Close incidents via recovery alerts](../../operations/incident_management/manage_incidents.md#automatically-close-incidents-via-recovery-alerts).
 
-## DORA metrics availability
+## Analytics features
+
+DORA metrics are displayed in the following analytics features:
+
+- [Value Streams Dashboard](value_streams_dashboard.md) includes the [DORA metrics comparison panel](value_streams_dashboard.md#devsecops-metrics-comparison-panels) and [DORA Performers score panel](value_streams_dashboard.md#dora-performers-score-panel).
+- [CI/CD analytics charts](ci_cd_analytics.md) show the history of DORA metrics over time.
+- [Insights reports](../project/insights/index.md) provide the option to create custom charts with [DORA query parameters](../../user/project/insights/index.md#dora-query-parameters).
+- [GraphQL API](../../api/graphql/reference/_index.md) (with the interactive [GraphQL explorer](../../api/graphql/index.md#interactive-graphql-explorer)) and [REST API](../../api/dora/metrics.md) support the retrieval of metrics data.
+
+## Project and group availability
 
-The table below provides an overview of the DORA metrics' availability in projects and groups:
+The following table provides an overview of the DORA metrics' availability in projects and groups.
 
 | Metric                    | Level             | Comments |
 |---------------------------|-------------------|----------|
@@ -267,9 +242,9 @@ The table below provides an overview of the DORA metrics' availability in projec
 | `time_to_restore_service` | Project and group | Unit in days. Aggregation method is median. (Available in UI chart in GitLab 15.1 and later) |
 | `change_failure_rate`     | Project and group | Percentage of deployments. (Available in UI chart in GitLab 15.2 and later) |
 
-### DORA metrics data aggregation
+## Data aggregation
 
-The table below provides an overview of the DORA metrics' data aggregation in different charts.
+The following table provides an overview of the DORA metrics' data aggregation in different charts.
 
 | Metric name | Measured values | Data aggregation in the [Value Streams Dashboard](value_streams_dashboard.md) | Data aggregation in [CI/CD analytics charts](ci_cd_analytics.md) | Data aggregation in [Custom insights reporting](../../user/project/insights/index.md#dora-query-parameters) |
 |---------------------------|-------------------|-----------------------------------------------------|------------------------|----------|