From 46dfbf3d7ea65bef7fc2491103f07cb3d627d6ab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Max Woolf <mwoolf@gitlab.com>
Date: Thu, 1 Dec 2022 10:09:33 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Minor docs changes to the product analytics entrypoint

---
 doc/user/product_analytics/index.md | 24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/user/product_analytics/index.md b/doc/user/product_analytics/index.md
index ebeb1f171a8f7..fa2dfc2e271b3 100644
--- a/doc/user/product_analytics/index.md
+++ b/doc/user/product_analytics/index.md
@@ -32,24 +32,24 @@ Prerequisite:
 1. Select **Enable product analytics** and enter the configuration values.
    The following table shows the required configuration parameters and example values:
 
-    | Name                         | Value                      |
-    |------------------------------|----------------------------|
-    | Jitsu host                   | `https://jitsu.gitlab.com` |
-    | Jitsu project ID             | `g0maofw84gx5sjxgse2k` |
-    | Jitsu administrator email    | `jitsu.admin@gitlab.com` |
-    | Jitsu administrator password | `<your_password>` |
+    | Name                         | Value                                                      |
+    |------------------------------|------------------------------------------------------------|
+    | Jitsu host                   | `https://jitsu.gitlab.com`                                 |
+    | Jitsu project ID             | `g0maofw84gx5sjxgse2k`                                     |
+    | Jitsu administrator email    | `jitsu.admin@gitlab.com`                                   |
+    | Jitsu administrator password | `<your_password>`                                          |
     | Clickhouse URL               | `https://<username>:<password>@clickhouse.gitlab.com:8123` |
-    | Cube API URL                 | `https://cube.gitlab.com` |
-    | Cube API key                 | `25718201b3e9...ae6bbdc62dbb` |
+    | Cube API URL                 | `https://cube.gitlab.com`                                  |
+    | Cube API key                 | `25718201b3e9...ae6bbdc62dbb`                              |
 
 1. Select **Save changes**.
 
 ## Product analytics dashboards
 
 Each project can define an unlimited number of dashboards. These dashboards are defined using our YAML schema and stored
-in the `.gitlab/product_analytics/dashboards/` directory. The name of the file is the name of the dashboard, and visualizations are shared across dashboards..
+in the `.gitlab/product_analytics/dashboards/` directory of a project repository. The name of the file is the name of the dashboard, and visualizations are shared across dashboards.
 
-Project maintainers can enforce approval rules on dashboard changes, and dashboards can be versioned in source control.
+Project maintainers can enforce approval rules on dashboard changes using features such as code owners and approval rules. Dashboards are versioned in source control with the rest of a project's code.
 
 ### Define a dashboard
 
@@ -57,8 +57,8 @@ To define a dashboard:
 
 1. In `.gitlab/product_analytics/dashboards/`, create a directory named like the dashboard. Each dashboard should have its own directory.
 1. In the new directory, create a `.yaml` file with the same name as the directory. This file contains the dashboard definition, and must conform to the JSON schema defined in `ee/app/validators/json_schemas/product_analytics_dashboard.json`.
-1. In the `.gitlab/product_analytics/dashboards/visualizations/` directory, create a `yaml` file. This file defines the visualization type for the dashboard, and must conform to the schema in 
-`ee/app/validators/json_schemas/product_analytics_visualization.json`.
+1. In the `.gitlab/product_analytics/dashboards/visualizations/` directory, create a `yaml` file. This file defines the visualization type for the dashboard, and must conform to the schema in
+ `ee/app/validators/json_schemas/product_analytics_visualization.json`.
 
 The example below includes three dashboards and one visualization that applies to all dashboards.
 
-- 
GitLab